It's quite nice, for your first colored drawing. Mine wasn't as good, LOL. Just keep working, practice is the mother of wisdom (or something like that)

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Im not gonna be harsh, i cant draw to save my life!! But this is not somthing for my taste, but its still a good drawing.

My favorite part is the upper left corner.
This is better than what I could have done!

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Very cute! I like how you just colored in the blue, it makes the rest stand out!

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Since it's set to be an "Advance critique" It would be better if I give some critiques on this deviation. First of all, The colors, I'd like to see more shading on the colors, maybe you can use other skin tone colors to support the image, and also for the face.

Then the second one... (I think) on the coluds that the woman's sit on ... The clouds, however needs some more grey and black tones so that it can make a difference between the clothes and the clouds...

Add little more objects, and colors on the background to support the image a bit, and maybe you need to retouch the image by using photoshop, and make them look softer (re-touched).

That's all that I can comment on... have a nice day, and hopefully it will help

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Nice! The soft colors really add to the overall feel of the piece. Well done!

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Since this is set at Advanced, even though you said not to be harsh..I'll try not to be harsh but give some critique at the same time. The colors are..bland. Shading and bolder colors would make this stand out more. As it stands right now it looks very flat. Also, the shape of her head is unrealistic. Other than that, the composition is really nice.

I like the intricacy of some of the details added to this, very peaceful. I cannot crit any further as those above me have already mentioned them. Keep up, practice will refine the few innaccuracies.

I love the colours so far this is a very nice piece although you have to full view it to get the detail. with a bit more work this could be very well done

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